This? A thing of beauty?
My heart? She be beating all day absolutely amazed at the atmosphere you created. There's just something in the way that you write that absolutely amazes me! The way I get so easily immersed in how you write, the way you explain scenarios and feelings uniquely by tone and words, as well as showing it in an indirect way--
My writer heart beeseches thee.
Honestly, I could ramble all day and I probably will but I'm just gonna end it here because oh my god I absolutely adore this and thanks so much for creating something as amazing as this!
I have no words because I'm sure I vomited it all out in my comment (so sorry it's so long my mind wouldn't stop a-buzzing--) But my god, MMM!
I love everything from the art and colors! Seriously, it being blue when blue is given to calming, serene or sad scenes but this was anything but calming, serene, or sad (it was depressing, it managed to unlock to that level). It was cathartic, terrifying, and painful, something you would associate with red but the mix of shades of blue and black blended much better and gave such a reaction as we see through a PORTION of Leighton's abuse.
Leighton himself is a tragic character, however he became twisted and insane. Yet, from what we see he's almost quite chillingly calm and suave, almost charming in how he talks with his victims (even with his bored comment). It's such a contrast to when I saw yangire in the more information, I immediately thought of an automatic aggressive and rude individual, but Leighton appeared normal, disturbingly normal as he was in the middle of torturing people.
His project really intrigues me, however, I'm sure it's sick and twisted as he continues on. I feel bad for him, but I don't agree that what he's currently doing is any good as he just kills people for his selfish gain, that is, in my theory, creating his dream garden, the safe haven in his mind.
Again-- Amazing work! I honestly love it!
Had a lot of fun with this one! Love the story set up and the implied time loops and some philosophical talks, it's a good one~!
It's a promising VN with a lot of polishing, the story itself is really intriguing so I'm curious to see what you have in mind and I hope some of the issues gets ironed out!
This was such a cool little VN! I'm really impressed how well it looks and the story behind it actually intrigued me, especially with the company behind the android's creations. The uneasiness of the android's blank stare and smile, the robotic and stilted way of talking, and the endings! Man those shook me to the core as I got Ending 3 since I wasn't aware of the direction it was going!