I really liked the feeling I got from your song, but think the low end on the mix is missing a bit, great job :)

Take care!

Nice work on creating a sense of atmosphere.

Constructive critique:

High synths are maybe a little harsh and piercing. The mix doesn't really have much of a spatial sense to it, like things being near and far. 

Overall good work though!

The vibes are great—very exploratory, like searching for ruins right before the big discovery. Adding a closing cadence could make the ending feel more complete, as I was really wanting more!

It was quite cinematic indeed. Low bass entrance around 0:50 was really nice. I liked the overall flow, but I feel it did not have some final kind of phrase maybe?
Overall, great job!

Sounds great! Captured the feeling of exploring an ancient lost ruins very well, and I enjoyed how it switched things up as it progressed but still flows naturally. Great use of instruments and synths to help enhance the ambience.

Some critiques I have is that maybe there could've been a little extra mixing to the sound, though I can't say exactly what. Probably some extra EQing in the mid-range. I also noticed something sounding a little dissonant with the low bass, like something is overlapping it when the key change occurs.

Other than that, I enjoyed this. Great work!

Cool stuff! really like the synth.