A project full of fun character designs, an interesting world and engaging dialogue that passes by at breakneck speed. Spin City's pacing is its greatest flaw, creating a series of rapid-fire scenarios that never have the time to linger. With all the aforementioned qualities, it's a shame that readers can't really simmer down and enjoy these charming characters and story. Even if this were to be expanded, the pacing would make for a tiring experience, so hopefully things will be shifted around a little more if there's a continuation or "full release."

A really cozy game with a very refreshing feel to it. Beeptune goes out of its way to inject some "easy novelty" into the reading experience, e.g., panning over parts of a background to add motion and a metaphorical spotlight on certain aspects of the scene.

I love the character design as well. Characters with hair-obscuring facial features that rumble when talking is a fun design aspect I like in characters (c.f. the Kitaki boss from Apollo Justice), and I like a snakier snake than many VNs have in it. 

The story is a good mix of slice of life with some suspenseful moments sprinkled in. I'll definitely come back to this to see where the narrative arc goes should it update again.