Thank you for this!! I'll have to double proof next time, but it's so easy to miss when I'm the only one proofreading and testing. I'll probably have to get some beta testers later on when it gets more complicated.
As for the hair thing, I hate it too...but I didn't want to make a whole bunch of passages just for the character customisation but maybe it'll be easier. Harlowe unfortunately doesn't allow some things I would be able to do on SugarCube but I've gotten used to Harlowe and it's difficult to switch now. 🥴