This story has really captivated me.
Your writing is absolutely beautiful without being overly descriptive (I get easily frustrated when I have to read a page long description about the environment XD). The setting and rules of this world were also easily digested. It feels very natural, unlike some stories I've read where I have to read an encyclopedia article before I can move on with the story.
The whole time I was reading I was so tensed up! You've truly managed to create a foreboding atmosphere and extremely interesting characters. I love them all, also I am suspicious of every single person I come across :(. I don't know why but that fork-tongue demon slithered his way into my heart, I hate him (I love him).
All the choices you can make in the game also feel impactful, even if they tie back into the main story. It makes each playthrough feel different. I have checked out your other games too and they all definitely feel unique to your brand, even if they deal with different subjects. Anyways, sorry for rambling. I just want to say that I'll happily read/play anything you create because it's just that good!
The gothic style of this particular story is perfect for me which is why it's my favourite. I am eagerly looking forward to whenever you are done with it. I'll be more than happy to pay for this quality product. Thank you PDRRook!