Artwork is very good. Gameplay is also nice, considering the amount of time you took it.
However the narration sounds very artificial. Are any of you Russian? Or is it your imagination of old Rusglish? Tbh offensive. стыд
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Hey there,
We are really sorry you thought it was offensive, we tried to paint a heroic vision of these men and never was it meant to be disrespectful to anyone.
We didn't have any male friends that spoke Russian, but we had a Russian girl that coached the voice actors, they tried their best with the little time they had and the little experience in voice acting they had.
We thank them a lot for their effort considering they were very short on time and very busy and we hope you understand their situation too.
Thank you for trying our game and we hope you enjoy our other créations.
Thank you for your answer!
I think that during development you can make a better narration. Language 100 years ago was different than now, it is hard for most of modern language users to imitate old accent (the best to ask your friend's parents, since most of users around 50 years old are having this kind of accent). If that was your first try then good job. I was thinking that you just grabbed some words and made fun from it without checking. However it can be definitely improved. I can offer my help comrades.
Overall it is very good game, chapeau bas.
We would love to have your help if we do something similar, for now our team is very tired and have a lot of life responsabilities.
These type of scenes will be part of our big game "Bag of Swording" that will have a graphical remake as well as more gameplay elements and if we ever plan to include Russian (which is now sounding very appealing) we will call you first.
Thank you for the feedback we really appreciate it !