Overall this is a solid submission, and quite ambitious for a 7 day jam! I enjoyed the art style, although I'm not sure how well it pairs with the investigative, psychological tone... but I enjoy the "crunchy" look of it. I think if the fog and screen effects were slightly reduced it would make the game more enjoyable!
I was immersed in the game and it has a great atmosphere and clear passion woven into it, so I appreciate it a lot. It would be cool to see what you can cook up with even more time.
Some small issues with the game:
- The first key was very hard to spot, it was hidden in plain sight! If it was slightly brighter it would help
- I wasn't looking at the correct area at the end, missing the climax
- I didn't enjoy being trapped in areas whilst listening to the story. I think it's fine but the sequences are a little too long