There's one thing I want added in act 3: consequences of bad ends. By that I mean that I want to know what happens to whoever killed you, since they at LEAST get fucked up by May for killing their one and only hire, I hope
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Also also also what actually happened to the engine? Did Kate break it or was it Domino? And was it an actual set-up to get you when you least expected or just so happen to happen which would mean that Kate temporarily resisted the curse AND put on a convincing show if it was a set-up (if some words don't make sense, am sorry, I'm about 3/4 self-taught)