I'd like to say so far I've been really impressed with the plot and pacing of the game. I wonder how nonlinear the plot will progress, as I've grown to find the choice aspect up to this point as feeling like it does have an impact and whether it ultimately does or not, that's a good feeling for a player to have.
Also I know you've said you're working on this solo, but if you ever do need additional help with proofreading, I'd gladly offer my support. Not that this novel so far has had particular editing issues I've noticed, but nonetheless, just feel like any help for someone working on their own I'd like to offer.
Great work, and we're all looking forward to more.