I'm planning to watch all the series in chronological order and in Japanese dub. I've already watched adventure 1 and 2 and the movies before and after them, and currently I'm in Tamers and also looking at some games to start with.
So far I'm loving digimon SO much, it's all I ever wished pokemon to be, and it makes me sad I didn't grow with it, only thing I saw as a kid (and I barely remember it) was data squad. The way you can feel the danger and how they search for solutions to the problems, how they act, express themselves and grow, how the digimons also do the same, it all shocked me when I saw it because I settled my expectations far too low since I foolishly thought it would be like pokemon (at this point I only like the spin-off games lmao).
And palmon, yeah, I don't know what dub you saw but for me, Palmon's voice in the Japanese dub melts me, she's my third fave after goma and gabu.
I did indeed like where you placed your game in the story since I wondered what would happen if they used the wrong card. It's a nice touch. Also, thanks for the encouragement, it's mostly writing/speaking where English usually fails me since where I live I have no one to practice with and I'm a lurker by nature so I almost never write anything, not even comments. Keep the good work going!