I liked it as well. There were a couple of grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious. Also, the story ended on an error for me and someone bumped into me. Is that supposed to happen?
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oh lord, i'm super sorry i'm getting to this so late :( i don't use itch.io that often
to answer the first: the error should be fixed now, i'll double-check it anyway but i did a quick bug update a little while back :)
the second: the scrollbar actually came with the template i'm using! if you'd like, and have it, you can add me on discord and i'll dive into the code and find you the specific bit to send over?