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Okay I just finished the prologue and I have MAJOR issues with the ending...maybe this is a result of where anime plots are going but the MC personality is all over the place and that potion...plus how he deals with the demon...and her shrinking....there's just some really BAD developments overall with the story where it starts to go well and then something stupid happens. The game itself is great but my god these plots definitely make me put the game down. It feels wacky like some anime RP on gaia online where the plot goes crazy all of a sudden because of a lack of input. I guess I have set a high bar for this game but everything else is on point but...

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Hello, remember it's the prologue, it's a setup for what will happen in Chapter 1
I took way more time to think about the story and development of the characters on chapter 1, I hope you like it.

I hope you don't take it the wrong way and I do understand what you mean...that was just my personal feelings because I really enjoyed your game and I AM excited for the next installment. I just wanted to give my honest opinion about it but the fact you came up with it yourself is impressive and I probably should have said that. Very good game tho. I apologize if I offended you but that kinda threw me off a little bit. No hard feelings.

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Hey, it doesn't offend me, any, ANY type of feedback is good. It helps improve the game, I'm aware that the prologue has some... issues about the story.

If you don't mind, would you like to let me know what exactly you didn't like about the story? And how maybe you think it could be better!
Thanks!