Your very cruel and evil to leave it as you did with mnm, as soon as she moved her arms, i don't know but i found myself with a few tears, I can't believe you left it there!
On the other hand your not really cruel or evil, but it really felt that way at the end of the scene and update.One thing got me a little puzzled. Was it always your intention to leave it where it currently is with anna, or where you planning to do a little more, but ran out of time or was the plan to always do that semi cliff hanger or whatever its called? It just felt really weird? to leave it as it was until the next update, i don't know? loved every minute of the story. But please, mnm is good because its not filled with giant boobed women, which takes away any immersion. MNM the ladies either have small or normal sized boobs, which is completely refreshing.