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I really enjoyed this game and my favorite character is Lenya. I think the writing needs to be improved on I noticed a few typos here and there and it would help if you put internal monologuing in parentheses since a lot of times I was wondering if people were saying what they were thinking like the main character tended to do in the beginning.

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Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Right now for character's  internal monologuing, I'm just inclining the words, but I could look into it more if it becomes an issue. And as for Lenya, her story/romance is the focus of v0.08, which I'm currently working on. So I hope you look forward to her romance in the future.