There is a lot of things to say,

first of, the dialog has no way to skip at, people usually skip it, and some of it I didn't read because they gone so fast !

when the player die, I didn't know how to restart , so I restart the whole game,

for your first game is not bad, but the music could done magic for you if you added them, good game , keep it up, and I hope you try my game too.