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The Mitsubishi Bank Heist Suspect's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Documentation | #18 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Research & Development | #22 | 2.750 | 2.750 |
Overall | #24 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
Presentation | #25 | 2.250 | 2.250 |
Technical | #26 | 2.250 | 2.250 |
Creative | #27 | 2.250 | 2.250 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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nice uvs and texturing, but could use some work on anatomy. A anaatomy figure is always a good buy in the future, but simply keep practising, you have all the nuts and bolts and doing well.
Character is looking good! Considering a suit is a very difficult thing to make you have done quite a good job on it.
I think the thing that could be improved on this character is the overall proportions and anatomy, as they feel a little off to me, which i think has had the knock on effect of making the suit a little too fitting.
Materials are looking good, id maybe try adding a little more contrast in the roughness (more shiny latex gloves, same on the the tie to make it read as a different material and the nylon on bullet proof vests is usually slightly more shiny). Id also tile the weave on the suit a bit more as it looks a little big.
Great character work though, real big improvements over your first round entry!
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