Enjoyed myself with this one! I like how you illustrate the characters and though I feel like many things could be improved such as the pacing of the story, possibly hiding Fyodor's scars to make a bigger impact for new players, adding a bit more mystery over how ancient or out of touch Fyodor is, and maybe slowly learning more about the Crawling Rot and the secrets of Fyodor instead of finding it in a journal, I do acknowledge that it's still being worked on and it gave the general feel really good!
I'm looking forward to what comes next~!
This was quite the delightful little VN~! Though it was also pretty unsettling.
I like how Zecharias is such a unique character, his design by far stands out to me and not only that but I'm curious of his origins. I thought he could be a siren or harpy, then I wondered if there was another demon that embodies that trait while also being artistic based on what we see of Zecharias... Either way, this is really good and I hope to see more of him~!
This is so fineee! I love the art, it gives off such a painterly noir vibe that perfectly fits with both the grim reality MC is faced with and also a soft glow to the few moments of respiration with the same person who could just be manipulating the entire situation for his own benefits. Regardless, this is such an amazing VN I'm so looking forward to what'll come next!!
Absolutely chaotic I was in awe, I have to say I was really impressed by how well-written and expansive it feels despite how it's not that long. Not only that, but the multiple choices and timed events, while a bit dizzying to go through, did add that overall desperation and chaos to a situation as insane as the one the MC is currently going through. I have to say, I think while I'm a bit curious over what the actual living hell is going on with Sable, I'm much more curious if there will be any new content with him like a detective or a police officer combing through the cases of disappearance in the city, all of them linking in that specific forest because it's quite curious how exactly is Sable able to get away with any of these?
Not only that, but I'm really amazed at everything about it. At first I was scared if there was going to be some explicit scenes of violence but I was relieved when it was only written in the text, yet the first time I read them I really winced as I felt bad for MC. Amazing job with this VN! Your hard work is seen and heavily appreciated~!
Had a blast interacting with Zack, I like how he doesn't move to attack you unless you give him a reason (running away or rejecting him) because it does fit what we know of him in the VN. That he wouldn't normally kill someone but because the customer was doing too much Zack took matters in his own hands, however with how he talks to Yuuri when he either kills or kidnaps MC I'm wondering if he has experience over this kind of thing and if so, how and why?
It's honestly pretty curious and I love it, amazing job with this one~!