I really enjoyed this adventure. The mix of actual slang that *sounds* like it fits with Carrol's nonsense words was artfully done. The factions of the three different locations and how helping one sets the others into unease was well thought out.
This was a great first entry, and I can't wait to see more of the setting unfold.
Feels like a very exciting and action-packed adventure in modern times
Looks great and loved the 'Switching up the formula' idea
Good adventure, loved the dependable lockpick relic!
I love the idea of intelligent skeletons. I've used the idea once before, but it confused my players, and it delights me you wrote a whole town of them and an adventure to go with it!