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A jam submission

Territory AbsoluteView game page

Semi-text VN about girls and darkness
Submitted by SasDeRider | podval01 (@SasDeRider) — 1 day, 8 hours before the deadline
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Submitted

OK, this is the last entry I’m testing from this jam.

The premise looks interesting, unfortunately I find the in-game English text hard to understand… Was is it translated as a second step from Russian? I can mostly understand what’s going on (first the spider attack, then morning wake up and the news about energy leaks) but the inconsistent pronouns and odd locutions make it sometimes hard to catch what’s going on precisely or what people are feeling (which is important for immersion and drama).

I stopped mid-way as I prefer playing the game later right if it gets some revisited English version, rather than going through a half-baked experience. If you update it at some point, you can reply to me so I’ll get notified.

So I can’t really give relevant feedback right now. Except on art maybe, I like the background styles, whether they were painted over photos, post-processed or originally made.

Submitted

Ah, I see that you indicated you used deepl for the English translation on the main game page!

Too bad itch doesn’t give extra information on the game on the jam release page! Maybe next time we should let devs add additional info via jam-specific fields to fill on submission.