Hello, I am part off the jury for the beginner circle Jam, I really liked your narrative game. We found a kind of digital convention about narrative games. I really enjoyed your game and I am contacting 3 other developers that did good narrative stories too (about this convention). I am talking with the other member of the Jury too see if we have a little more quality narrative games. So if you want to organize which each other for a kind of bundle on the same thematic ("a different planet" of course), don't hesitate. I am easily reachable throw the discord of this Jam (same name). You can also present your game alone at this convention if you want, of course. https://www.ludonarracon.com/
It's a short but nice visual novel! I'm sad what happened to Ylivea cause she was starting to be my favorite character. I didn't expect that twist with Marol without saying any spoilers (I got the Marol ending).
I know it's a 15 minute game but I feel like the characters could have been more developed. When that thing happened to Zan, I didn't really care about him which heavily influenced my decision so I feel that most players would probably do the same. Decisions should be difficult to make, if that makes sense. It would have been interesting to see more routes taken in the story. I'm wanna know how Marol developed that drug.
Thanks a lot for playing our game! We agree that ideally the story should be fleshed out deeper and expanded, but we were trying to keep it minimalistic due to the time constraints.
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Hello, I am part off the jury for the beginner circle Jam, I really liked your narrative game. We found a kind of digital convention about narrative games. I really enjoyed your game and I am contacting 3 other developers that did good narrative stories too (about this convention). I am talking with the other member of the Jury too see if we have a little more quality narrative games. So if you want to organize which each other for a kind of bundle on the same thematic ("a different planet" of course), don't hesitate. I am easily reachable throw the discord of this Jam (same name). You can also present your game alone at this convention if you want, of course. https://www.ludonarracon.com/
The winners will be announced on the 1/16/2021, 9 PM GMT on the discord
Really nice visual story about geopolitic on a alien planet with 4 kingdoms that negotiate. Original and nice ending.
Thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed it!
It's a short but nice visual novel! I'm sad what happened to Ylivea cause she was starting to be my favorite character. I didn't expect that twist with Marol without saying any spoilers (I got the Marol ending).
I know it's a 15 minute game but I feel like the characters could have been more developed. When that thing happened to Zan, I didn't really care about him which heavily influenced my decision so I feel that most players would probably do the same. Decisions should be difficult to make, if that makes sense. It would have been interesting to see more routes taken in the story. I'm wanna know how Marol developed that drug.
Overall, great job on the game!
Thanks a lot for playing our game! We agree that ideally the story should be fleshed out deeper and expanded, but we were trying to keep it minimalistic due to the time constraints.
Did you try all of the endings?
Glad to see you enjoy our game :).
I didn't get all of the endings. I wanted to try out a bunch of submissions to provide feedback to people. But I might revisit this one later :)