Wow! A very touching and poignant story (so far ;P ) Great visuals accented with excellent music. Of course, I am a sucker for RPG Maker and it always makes my spirit soar to see it utilized so well (this is one of the good ones that showcases RPG Maker's true potential). I don't want to give too much of it away, but the story very much speaks to the issues of today. I love the title as well and the entire concept, among many others, righting the wrongs of your predecessors. I would really love to see this continued! A truly beautiful tale in the making. GREAT JOB!!! 

Thank you. I am redeveloping the game with more content. Now I have a foundation to work with :)

Hauntingly beautiful music, however I'd suggest to polish up the typos as they can be quite distracting when telling an emotional story. The story ends too fast though although understandable given the 48 hours available - curious to see how it develops further!