Play asset pack
Ru - Deep Sea Adventure Tour Guide's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Creative Development | #3 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
Final Presentation | #4 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
Overall | #8 | 4.200 | 4.200 |
Technical / Workflow | #10 | 4.250 | 4.250 |
Research + Development | #17 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Project Documentation | #18 | 3.750 | 3.750 |
Ranked from 4 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous.
- You've done a really good job, it's a very appealing piece that could certainly be used in a video game. From concept to execution it works on all levels; you have incorporated various techniques and gave it a very nice stylized look yet retain some of that realism. Your presentation is great with all the lightning and materials interacting with your texture work is quite nice. Some tiny suggestions for improvement I could give you is that you could have worked on the face a bit more to make it have a bit more features because it feels a tiny bit generic. Like the face the hair also is too clean and so I would suggest adding more variation to the hair sheets and even perhaps some thin hair sheets that go on about their business. The hair could use a roughness map to add that shine and make it really fit with the materials of the body. I recommend watching these videos for inspiration: https://youtu.be/Arbg8O2iH_0?t=1078 https://youtu.be/6xBMcnx2Kkk In short, adding a bit more variations/imperfections could really elevate your piece however I'm very impressed with it and almost downright jealous. I wish you had shared a bit more of your process on your documentation because it could be quite interesting for other artists. Great job!!!
Challenge Tier
Search For A Star
Leave a comment
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Comments
This is amazing!! Really nice job
Wonderful! I'd love to see more of your work
Thank you! I really love your work as well, stunning color composition!!