Really weird but good game. I included it in part 20 of my Cyberpunk Jam compilation video series, if you have time to take a look :) http://youtu.be/8cg-WyUUan4

Nice! A pretty solid story that is well written, clear, and establishes an engaging world. It kept me interested until the end (ending three).
The illustrations were beautiful, especially the title image, and really enhanced the experience.

Cyberpunk as a genre seems to work really well with Twine. I'm reluctant to define things in this way, but my biggest concern with this entry is that there is not enough interactions or 'branches' to move it from a 'story' where you simply turn the page, to a 'game' where the player has agency and can explore the story through the hyperlinks.