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• Hi Jacob, While you admit this is not your best work - I definitely think this is a very cool idea and well executed. However, with a scene like this, the assets have a greater emphasis, and carry some of the weight when it comes to believability. With that said, here are my notes: 1. I'd spend a little bit of time fleshing out the models - the slides and chairs seem a little 'wobbly' and I'd recommend smoothing them out and investing some more triangles to help with that. 2. I'd love to see some more breakup on the roughness for the pool tiling - maybe ease up on the random rotations of the tiles and focus more on some of the caulking / grout inbetween. It would be great to see some decals added on to help break up the roughness in random areas. 3. The caution / slippery when wet sign needs a bit of love - the normal here just reads very strong and brings down the rest of the signage. Otherwise - nice work! You made something that was manageable with your course load, and I think you played to your strengths.