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• Hi Alice, When a scene becomes abstract like this, people tend to focus on the assets they can relate to - so it becomes really important that they read well. I'd strongly recommend three next steps here to push this scene to the next level: 1. Focus a bit more on the book - it was difficult to tell what it was without reading the notes and could use a bit more refinement in the sculpt - perhaps separate it out as another asset. 2. While this is an ethereal-esque scene, the backdrop is a little too spartan here. I'd recommend looking at some options in fleshing it out, even if subtle. 3. I'd love to see some more exploration on the crystals here - they seem a bit plain - have you explored or done research on how to represent fantastical gemstones online? There are some neat ideas out there.