Judge feedback

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• Hi Lolo, Good job on getting this done and without crunching. Time management can be difficult as a student, and at least you were able to finish. That being said, looking at your notes here is some feedback: 1. Even in a clean environment, not everything is pristine - right now it feels like everything is factory new and could use with some wear and tear - a little grunge. Everything is laid out very cleanly and orderly - which isn't always the case, even in a restaurant. It's hard to see the reference you've used here - but I'd take another look, and even look at other photos of other restaurants to see how they tend to look. 2. Spend some more time on your materials - everything reads a little flat - the ceiling the walls specifically. Pull up some reference, or take photos of brickwork from the building and see how you can reproduce it better. After you focus on those two elements, take another look at some of the scales of your assets - they read as a bit too large and the counter too small - but I can't tell since the reference is too low res here. Scale is usually the biggest area where more junior artists have trouble with, so I'd spend a bit of time measuring things out just to double check!