Really awesome to see someone else upload a visual novel for the game! I like the aesthetic of the text being in the middle of the screen, which worked since the only other visuals were just the background art. This was a really sweet story to read before heading off to bed too. I saw the first couple of minutes played on the twitch stream and made a note to check it out later and I'm very glad I did! Two comments though: I would highly recommend changing some of the name text colors to brighter shades so they don't dissolve into the black text box area, some were very hard to read. I also found having two characters, one named Paul and one named Pauline became very confusing as I thought Paul was a nickname for the player character until very late into the game. So changing one or the other would clear things up drastically. Other than that very sweet story! Loved the accompanying music too, very nice choices.