I like the concept and the humor here. Plus the journal was a really neat mechanic. 

That was so cute! Please expand it, we are waiting for you. thanks. 😍👍

Hey Gabriel, congrats man! I love the idea and think it would be an enjoyable online game with a Ranking system to engage the players. Another idea is to add character customization, and while fighting, some parts of the equipment would have a chance to get dropped on damage.