I absolutely love the story. Evelyn is a great writer. I also really like how the story integrates the theme; it's outside of the box. I still have to make time to see all the different outcomes, but I loved how choice affected the story, and how some of the Twine magic enhanced the story.

I even have a vod here from the stream when I played it!

Cool story, I think this is the only text adventure I've seen for the jam! I honestly can't believe you wrote something as coherent and compelling as that in the amount of time you did, kudos.

Check out our game Einnsámr as well :) https://itch.io/jam/gmtk-2019/rate/463168?after=20#post-871093

Dragon Quest mix with wizard of oz both of which i love. I enjoyed the read and I can tell you put a lot of effort into the short story. I would read another if made!