too much colours, too many accessories, story goes from 0 to 100 way too quick and most of all the writing needs serious work, however stuff like this is usually overlooked if the game is free
I just tried out the game and loved the writing style. Good luck for the future. <3
Meh ... you know already those type of games when you see them ...
poor character models, poor camera and setting, no animation in site. felt like they used some air modeling thing and said create without editing.