Judge feedback

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• Nice idea, and a complete story. Simple characters nicely designed, a shame the backgrounds were a bit basic, and some had artefacting. Demonstrated decent lip sync, some nice character poses. Light blue leg swirls didn't show up clearly against a light blue sky. Nice to hear composed music.
• A really nice finished project. Made me laugh and told the story well. Congratulations. All the best for your future in animation.
• Very stylised aesthetic to the project, simple bright colours along with single thin line weight. Great work on the lip sync, clean work that reads very well. Character animation was simple and linear mostly but with a clean execution. A nice touch was the use of inbetweens that added the motion blur feel. Some shots suffered from a use of lower resolution backgrounds that showed individual pixels. This felt detached from the clean lines of the characters. Could definitly see this used for educational purposes or childrens animated shows. Story was nice, and told very well. Good use of sound effects and good voice acting.
• Very sleek design and concept, storyline was very clear. Lip sync was well animated. However the dialogue used seemed slight robotic, try to used more natural voices by changing the pitch.
• great film!