Weird, I don't see your game as a part of the Unity Jam 2024 Tooling.gg. Anyway, Just like I said on my post , I will give my feedback.

The experience is pretty good. I feel like I'm in a fantasy with very interesting narrative story. Also... THE MUSIC IS SOOO PHENOMINAL.  Music and art definitely give soo much boost to the experience. Arts are beautiful. They really compliment each other and bring the most of the experience together. The story is funny. It reminds me of my school days when I want to have a free Microsoft office subscription. The game overall is pretty good, though I didn't see the theme expanding in this game. 

The battle could be better in terms of game design. I don't feel the anticipation before the attack. In turn base combat, its really important to exaggerate those things to announce the changes of the state of game. There is the animation but I already see the attack happened before the animation. This can be taken for granted and sometimes overlooked but knowing this and adding it to your game will become much more fun to play.

The player's reward for each battle is missing. Sure you can unlock next battle and upgrade your skills by idling and waiting for your mana to refill but personally I thinks that is not enough for player's expectations. Its very important to have reward and payoff in game. 

Overall, Be positive and work on improving your game design. I think this team could make something good in the future and I'm looking forward into it.

PS. Whoever did the music, you rock! Its soo good.