Despite being one of the longest entries in the jam, the story would probably benefit from a little more room to breathe. The dialogues, in particular, were a bit too focused on delivering exposition and left little time to develop the characters. Still, it was a fun ride and the premise was probably one of the most interesting ones out of all the jam entries.

You are a madman for actually making your own VN Engine on PlayDate.  I am still waiting for that Hot Coffee update you keep teasing.