I have to admit I'm a little baffled by this narrative. The abrupt ending aside, it felt very unclear who Morelle was supposed to be, much less Gray, and the body swap(?) doesn't seem to have made Gray feel at all dysphoric or uncomfortable or seem remarkable to them at all outside of the changed social expectation of being a much more high-class person. I couldn't figure out what was going on here and I came away feeling frustrated.
Our writer couldn’t finish the planned narrative in time so we uploaded what we had, should have left a note that it was unfinished… Really sorry about that :(
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I have to admit I'm a little baffled by this narrative. The abrupt ending aside, it felt very unclear who Morelle was supposed to be, much less Gray, and the body swap(?) doesn't seem to have made Gray feel at all dysphoric or uncomfortable or seem remarkable to them at all outside of the changed social expectation of being a much more high-class person. I couldn't figure out what was going on here and I came away feeling frustrated.
Hi penelopticon,
Our writer couldn’t finish the planned narrative in time so we uploaded what we had, should have left a note that it was unfinished… Really sorry about that :(
S'all good! I get beaten up by deadlines too. I hope you are able to finish this!
Thank you so much ToT