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A jam submission

Young MonkView game page

Aim zen waves at intrusive thoughts to maintain inner peace
Submitted by LittleMissLeeStories (@thejaquilee), Kontrakti (@Kontrakti1), Aleyna Baran (@AleynBaran) — 1 hour, 11 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Quality#34.3214.321
Audio#34.1434.143
Overall Performance#83.9293.929
Theme + Challenges#123.9643.964
Gameplay#213.4643.464
How Fun#263.2863.286

Ranked from 28 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Less than a month of experience and coming up with this type of creative game idea? That's so impressive! I had fun playing this! The feeling of the game is so cool. I think you couldn't add much mechanics/abilities to it just because the theme is Minimalism, but after jam! I hope you will keep working on this! Things you can improve: - Get players attention! I always tell this, we can't allow the player to feel like he/she is doing the same thing, at same difficulty! Every 20 seconds or a minute the game should change a little, player has to focus on game on what's happening :D - Add different ways for game mechanic, like maybe drag and drop some controllable thoughts by mouse, or right clicking for charging! These are some major upgrades you can include in your game! But do you need to? No, of course not! I can only suggest ideas, but I would prefer you to start with minor changes/bug fixes! Overall I really liked how this game feels like! Very nice job. Good luck on your future projects!

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Shooting thoughts in the flow of the music! Amazing work, good job with this!

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