This is such a cool design. Here are some reasons I want to play this game:

• Everything about the usage of the paper: crumpling it into a ball at the beginning to make the archer's task difficult by adding random creases; creasing the paper when you answer a challenge to make it feel like you're trying to line up a shot just right; and of course the tearing!
• The subtle and interesting bluffing game being played with the suns potentially obfuscating their gifts, or just being brazen about it and trying to get the archer to launch off a shot before their creases are in order. And the extra layer of handwriting deduction has narrative implications as well
• the variable end state, especially if the Archer ever misses a shot and has to play out the rest of the game knowing they've broken

Easy to learn, fun to play. Although it's just one page, I am having so much fun with it. Thank you for this great game :)

Nice game

 I really like the clean & neat layout with the street design. Also, the helpful indicators for mechanics and narrative are a very good idea.

Nice work.

P.S.: I spotted a missing “r” in The Ending section, third paragraph the first “you” should be a “your”.

; )

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