This is such a nice combination of narrative journaling and dice-rolling randomness. I've actually never played Yahtzee, so you might like to know that your writing and design is super clear to someone like me! I love that it also has a push-your-luck mechanic with the Journey rerolls. Always so tempting... Oh, and just for info, there is a tiny typo at the beginning of 'The Ending' section ("IThe").
That's super helpful feedback! I grew up playing Yahtzee, so I'm really glad that the writing made the mechanics clear. And thanks for the typo catch as well - it's fixed now!
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This is such a nice combination of narrative journaling and dice-rolling randomness. I've actually never played Yahtzee, so you might like to know that your writing and design is super clear to someone like me! I love that it also has a push-your-luck mechanic with the Journey rerolls. Always so tempting... Oh, and just for info, there is a tiny typo at the beginning of 'The Ending' section ("IThe").
That's super helpful feedback! I grew up playing Yahtzee, so I'm really glad that the writing made the mechanics clear. And thanks for the typo catch as well - it's fixed now!