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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall | #3 | 3.464 | 4.000 |
| Innovation | #3 | 2.887 | 3.333 |
| Gameplay (fun) | #4 | 3.175 | 3.667 |
| Design | #4 | 2.887 | 3.333 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.
- * Game loop was solid * Art assets clashed a decent amount, elements you can pass over should be less saturated or darker * Could use more camera controls Nice game, was fun to play!
- It was rather satisfying herding multiple pieces of paper through an obstacle course of crabs and dangerous machines. I don't think anyone is going to take the time to read the multi line paragraph at the beginning, those paragraphs should have been visual instructions on how to play, not an essay. The camera controls could use some work. It'd be nice to see a much larger field of view ahead of where you're blowing. Also, there needs to be more incentive to use the other powerups, I kind of just breezed through using the vortex power up. It's also hard to identify the "destroyed" cranes in the whole pile so i cant tell if i'm wasting time trying to gather them.
Team members if any:
@JojojoGame, Lucinius, @entropygamedev
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Congrats on top 3!
Thanks a ton!! It was a lot of fun to take part in your gamejam, and your theme was great! The team and I pretty much agree on all of your feedback, I definitely wrote way too much text but as we were throwing the tutorial together last minute, we didn't have time to do up some infographics. Regarding the different powers and their lack of use, originally we were planning to have certain obstacles types require certain powers to get through effectively, but in the end we were only able to implement a few different ones!
Love this one, my only big complaint is the camera is a bit too close-up
I would love to see more of the level!
The different spells are awesome, i love the variation.
EDIT: I revisited the game off stream since I missed the tutorial text ( I was so preoccupied with keeping the cranes up)
Really nice game.