Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

• GDD Introduction seems good. I would like to see images from the inspirations. I am glad to read about the basis of the inspiration. That is a good inspiration. Correct platform. Good! The art section could be improved by showing art asset and it doesn't have to be in depth, but just explain why ya pick the color palette or shows concept art of what ya have in mind for art. Good with minimum viable product and beyond. Game The game feels like a good point and click. I enjoyed it, but I noticed that the great goblin king have an placeholder art. Shame that "the combat" didn't finished implemented yet. I hope to see more of this. Perhaps have an puzzle that the player need to solve in order to progress or have more story that goes little more around within the game. I noticed the sack icon is at the same place as the renpy's menu button is, so it is a little hard to click on the icon. Also the game might need to be scaled to size dynamically, so that is something ya can look into. I am glad to see "minimap" and the dialogue system worked as intended. But I don't see too much "alchemy", so perhaps having an scene where ya can see the lab making the bread instead the bakery? Also worm regards from an mod. Nom.