Nice!
Excellent characterisation with wordcraft that really drew me in. Looking forward to the rest of the novel.
Good bones. Wait with anticipation for final version.
It's incredible to see Ren'py playing in a browser! I'd love to get my games running on their itch.io pages sometime, this is a great way to make it so that more people can play!
Nice little short game. Sweet and direct to the point :)
