Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

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• I think I saw what you were going for with this but I honestly did not find this game particularly engaging, nor did I feel it quite lived up to the theme of the jam. If the game's focus was on narrative it did not give me much to work with. I didn't really empathize with the child's personality and a lot of the events seemed rather alien and didn't seem to follow much of a narrative arc. The prose was limited and lacked personality and the plot felt rather arbitrary and rushed.
  
  Also, while I applaud the game's intention to attempt to examine serious topics I do feel that the game should have had a content warning for child abuse.