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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Technical / Workflow | #15 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Project Documentation | #19 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Research + Development | #19 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Final Presentation | #22 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Overall | #22 | 3.700 | 3.700 |
Creative Development | #26 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Contestant: Tyreece-Lee Salkind / @Tyreece Salkind Assessor: Tristan McGuire / @Draconic_Cowboy Tier: Search For A Star Congrats on completing your project! Things that went well: ✧ Really nice work taking inspiration from your moodboards and making that into a finished character. ✧ The poses for the final renders are well thought out and convey the emotions that you were intending. ✧ The inclusion of the beetle works really well and the beetle is very cute. Things to consider next time: ✧ Next time, make sure that you have good edgeflow across the whole model. Most of the body is nice, but the wings aren’t up to the same standard. ✧ When you are making cloth (especially more stylised cloth), give the high poly some thickness and bevel the edges so that they catch the light. ✧ Considering how small it is, the beetle could do with being lower poly. I hope this feedback proves useful and will help you with future projects and building your portfolio. You can find me on the social medias in the link below. Feel free to reach out in the future. All the best! https://draconic-cowboy.carrd.co/ - Tristan, Character Artist at Airship Interactive.
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Search For A Star
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