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Breathless's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Technical / Workflow | #2 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
Research + Development | #7 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
Project Documentation | #7 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
Overall | #8 | 4.200 | 4.200 |
Creative Development | #12 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Final Presentation | #22 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Contestant: Libbi-Faye Marshall / LibbiMarshall Assessor: Tristan McGuire / @Draconic_Cowboy Tier: Search For A Star Congrats on completing your project! Things that went well: ✧ Lots of high level technical skills showcased, such as Marvelous Designer, Substance Designer and groom art. ✧ Well done on using a rig. That really goes above and beyond expectations. ✧ Your pre-production and execution of the narrative are thoughtful and creative. ✧ Great to see that you are able to self-reflect on your work, both in seeing where you have grown and where you can further improve. It’s also lovely to see that you are appreciative of those around you. This shows an excellent level of maturity and paints you as being a great team member. Things to consider next time: ✧ Look into different methods of exporting MD simulations to ZB and look at alternate ways to create topology for simulated cloth. This would take your cloth work to the next level. For example: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/3drBWv ✧ Use of Wrap does show use of an industry standard software and an understanding of where time can be saved, which is great! Just make sure that some of your portfolio pieces show an ability to do manual retopology and UVs too. ✧Next time you do UVs, think of where you can straighten the edges of the shells so that you can pack them tighter and more easily apply tiling textures. I hope this feedback proves useful and will help you with future projects and building your portfolio. You can find me on the social medias in the link below. Feel free to reach out in the future. All the best! https://draconic-cowboy.carrd.co/ - Tristan, Character Artist at Airship Interactive.
Challenge Tier
Search For A Star
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