Judge feedback

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• Contestant: Izrael Pearman / @IzzyPear Assessor: Tristan McGuire / @Draconic_Cowboy Tier: Search For A Star Congrats on creating something for the competition! It is clear that this entry is unfinished, so feedback can only be quite limited. But I am so glad to see you did submit an entry. Well done :) Things that went well: ✧ Good to see you looked at real life references to inform your work. ✧ Nice understanding of what software is best for different elements of the model such as the body vs the collar. ✧ Use of cards for the feather cloak is a great approach. Things to consider next time: ✧ Next time you do a project, ensure enough planning is done and time allocated to complete the project right through to making a game ready model and presenting in engine. Even if this means choosing a concept that is smaller in scope. ✧ For your next sculpt, think about communicating the skin that is sitting on top of the muscles. In this model the muscle definition is good, but they feel bare. So make some brush strokes that are perpendicular to the muscle direction. ✧ Next time you do groom (whether that is hair, fur or feathers), don’t be afraid to make the cards higher poly. It’s fine to allocate a big chunk of your budget to the groom if that makes it look amazing. I hope this feedback proves useful and will help you with future projects and building your portfolio. You can find me on the social medias in the link below. Feel free to reach out in the future. All the best! https://draconic-cowboy.carrd.co/ - Tristan, Character Artist at Airship Interactive.