Play asset pack
Izaiah's Graveyard -Rising star 2023 -'s itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Project Documentation | #11 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Final Presentation | #12 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Technical / Workflow | #23 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Research + Development | #24 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Creative Development | #24 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Overall | #27 | 3.400 | 3.400 |
Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous.
- hi Mya, Research + Development Need far more refs on the blood aspect. Even though it's hard, look at graphic images that represents this accurately, from animals or you have the stomach for it, from war. When reproducing blood, you gotta be ready to do those things. https://api.time.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/israel-gaza-61.jpg I took the less graphical blood shed I could find yet real one. Technical / Workflow Need to see normal baking, trim sheets. Creative Development The blood is usually a big no no when it comes to showcasing work in portfolio. That being said, to make it more credible and serious looking you need to search for real world references and this can be unsettling. Otherwise this makes the blood look like cheap paint / strawberry jam, especially with this amount and this bright color... It is difficult to take it seriously. I would have put more effort on the mausoleum, more architectural details, more ornaments, trims. Look at gothic architecture references like Notre Dame in Paris. Alexandre Quintin - senior hard surface artist - vfx industry
Challenge Tier
Rising Star
Chosen brief
Environment Art (Standard)
Leave a comment
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Comments
No one has posted a comment yet