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A jam submission

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A "Search for a Star" entry by Madeleine Braby
Submitted by Madeleine Braby — 1 day, 5 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Final Presentation#233.0003.000
Research + Development#243.0003.000
Project Documentation#333.0003.000
Creative Development#482.0002.000
Overall#492.6002.600
Technical / Workflow#512.0002.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • hi Madeleine Research + Development I would have love to see more specific and deeper research on every small aspects of the light house. The windows, the lighthouse on the top, railings, etc. Technical / Workflow It would have been great to wireframe, Uvs, and trimsheets, some normal backing process as well. Creative Development Developing your own style is a very difficult task and feet. I do encourage you to push it. The ground where the light house sits could have a different treatment than the stones around the base. Even a different type of stone would have been better to make it " cleaner ". On one of your reference of a lighthouse there are gaps between each pannels / stones. This gives more sense of depth to the design. For now your lighthouse feels flat and needs more cavities / imperfections. Final Presentation It would be great to have wireframe, greyscale renders. Alexandre Quintin - senior hard surface artist - VFX industry

Challenge Tier

Search For A Star

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Environment Art (Standard)

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