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• I have included in the feedback to give you a better idea of where you sit as the 1-5 system felt quite limiting. The overall star rating shall reflect the overall score. R&D 1/5 no documentation provided Creative 2.5/5 Manufacturer Style - this vehicle does look like if it was fleshed out it could be similar to the MPUV from Argo. I think the colour is a little too yellow even for the older Argo ships. The majority of Argo ships feature a strong orange and I think that could have helped route it better in that family. The forms are fairly simple but do have some secondary forms that help break up the mainly blocky design Design - the purpose of the vehicle feels clear as some sort of cargo pick up and drop off the vehicle. Textures - It appears an attempt was made to add wear however it feels quite procedural. Technical 1/5 No documentation however the model looks low poly however it is too low poly, particularly when aiming for the star citizen style. It also appears to be a baked workflow which limits fidelity. There are also some shading errors in places Documentation 1/5 Not present Final Presentation 2.5/5 Rending - Overall Images are presented in a simple manner with sufficient lighting to show the details in the material. It is rendered in the engine in what appears to be the default level There are no additional media forms to showcase the vehicle
• cool idea, I think making the ship a bit more orange would of helped sell the argo brand and some more thickness on the side wing things, I see a few normal errors aswell so just be carful with that, over all i like it gives me transport heli vibes.