Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

• Good documentation and process, but a challenging topic as it is hardly the most exciting scene you can think of. The overall atmosphere is well conveyed, with the small petrol station feeling isolated and slightly unsettling. The main issue for me is the lack of believability of the different assets due to a lack of detail and information about their structure. Even if not going for a realistic style, I would recommend looking more closely at reference and see how the different parts connect together (ie how they were built), and how details and 'use and tear' give the object a sense of reality. If you can focus more on this I think you will be able to take scenes like this to the next level.