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Campfire in Clear Springs under the Night Sky's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Research + Development | #34 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Project Documentation | #36 | 3.167 | 3.167 |
Overall | #41 | 2.833 | 2.833 |
Final Presentation | #44 | 2.833 | 2.833 |
Technical / Workflow | #44 | 2.667 | 2.667 |
Creative Development | #53 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- Well done on pulling together a coherent scene in such a short space of time! It's great to see use of multiple light sources, work on a flag tutorial and flame FX. The scene is well assembled with trees framing the view and grass tufts that bed-in the logs on the ground. I would however comment on the quality of the assets such as the tent and fire side stones as not being of a high enough quality. Whilst this entrant is clearly capable of dressing a scene, more focus is needed on asset creation (modelling/UV/material) skills.
- Great thought process for someone so early in their learning. Documentation very thorough. Good work making a blockout and testing it and constantly refining. Learning Substance and improving your UVing skills will unlock you even further - look also into hardsurface modelling and sculpting either in Blender or ZBrush. Something to work on would be cohesiveness of your modelling texturing - the tent stands out a lot as being less defined, and ideally we want every asset in the scene to have equal treatment. Best of luck.
- The composition of the scene itself is working. You should add more atmospheric, play with the fog to layer the forest. A moon doesn't bring full black environment. Try to tick to PBR for your texture and keep a good texel ratio. Currently the trees, the ground, are looking too low resolution and somehow they look oily/wet when the rest of the environment isn't. Focus on improving your assets and you will get a better scene.
Challenge Tier
Rising Star
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