Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

• This is a fun scene, well documented with a structured approach to hitting the deadline. There are hints of 70's kitsch design with the sunken, circular seats and the window frames that feel like early Star-Trek. Whilst this entrant is clearly capable of dressing a scene, the quality of the individual assets is lacking and I'd encourage more focus on prop building. When the two come together, you'll have great diorama scenes.
• An interesting concept, but it's difficult to see where the art direction is going at this stage, A cylindrical environment can be challenging due to the symmetry I would suggest adding some asymmetric elements to add interest to the overall composition
• Good to see evidence of trim sheet workflow, and I like that you designed the telescope carefully with thought to how it would move. When you come back to this I'd start with the lighting as it is a bit confused with an overly bright centre and then very dark areas all around. Interesting concept, would be cool if you can pull it off.